[AAR]Bombers Bar RNG Armada: 180918: Murphy Strikes Back

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[AAR]Bombers Bar RNG Armada: 180918: Murphy Strikes Back

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Re: [AAR]Bombers Bar RNG Armada: 180918: Murphy Strikes Back
Generated Kills and Losses from the AAR Tool:


Roam members (103)
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Abgal Adamu - Purifier
Abre-Kan
Adrenaline Benazapam
Aldous Eistiras - Svipul
Alleirya - Nemesis
AshenShugar01 - Purifier
Aspin Darkfire - Nemesis
Balkor Wolf - Falcon
Boot1034 - Heretic
Brookss
Brookss2
Buster Atmosk
Chester Cheesetoes
Chrysus Averteritus - Hound
Daisy Bloodworth - Manticore
Darth Crayce - Nemesis
Dexomus Viliana
Dracoknight - Rapier
Draison Foul - Hound
Drizzt Entreri - Nemesis
Duke II Zepar - Purifier
Eamon Achasse - Nemesis
Elissim4U - Marshal, Pacifier
Emberina - Purifier
Emma Flame - Purifier
Ferisko Egivand - Purifier
Flar
Gemma Ambrye - Hound
George BubbleYou Bush - Purifier
Gillelli - Purifier
Goddess Freyjia - Purifier
Grench Skir - Nemesis
Grim Dredtog
Gualu Echerie - Prospect
Hanazava Karyna - Purifier
Harlock33 - Nemesis
Hector Shawn - Hound
House2twist - Manticore
Huge Jasss - Falcon
Ichigo Maltek
Izmaragd Dawnstar - Falcon
Jabbamirok
Kaitenn
Karolin Alma
Kennie Minh - Nemesis, Manticore
Kied Saissore - Manticore
Ladas Gladius Augustus
Locutus 'Minmatar' Tyrannos - Hound
MaDfReAk - Manticore
Major Vincent - Purifier
Malagong Karagalan
Mar5hy - Loki
MarlboroRedFT - Nemesis
Martinhella Lewisflame - Purifier
Medardus Nova - Manticore
Mei Long - Nemesis
Minoxis - Nemesis
Nate Ostus
NateTheGreat 24 - Hound
NeXnerD
Nevada Luna
Nika Delainen - Manticore
Noodles Fordayz - Hound
Oda Tokugawa - Hound
Ozob Bozo - Manticore
Patrick Adeon - Purifier
Raideur Ng
Razer Death
Reggie Rach
Revenged Avengy - Flycatcher
Sabezan Shayiskhun - Purifier
SammyTheSalmon
Sathe Vinkoln
Se0Hor - Hound
SharkSaver Baconator
Sick Artley - Manticore
Sleyas - Prowler
Slim Thicc - Manticore
Space Warfare Development - Hound
SpaceMarineGirl 77 - Tengu
Sphincter Spasm - Hound
Spike Fields - Hound
Tempelman JWH
Tempelman N
Thessa Tivianne
Tiberius MC - Viator
Trea Martin - Nemesis
Trestian - Falcon
Valentine Virpio
Valstaris - Purifier
Voss Enaka - Proteus
Washa Squasha - Purifier
Wokum - Nemesis
Wolfgang Aigner
Yelna Bora - Purifier
Yoshmoto
Zeerse Solaris - Nemesis
ZynXao Sazas - Nemesis
che ebaq
holann - Hound
kaare willock - Purifier
lEclipse - Hound
st0nr - Falcon
Kills and Losses

(17:46:50) Hothomouh
Rorqual +10138.52m

(18:32:01) 3-DMQT, N-8YET
Nemesis -90.89m
Prospect -57.41m
Hound -158.8m
Nemesis -157.74m
Capsule -44.72m
Manticore -65.36m
Nemesis -66.21m
Purifier -49.42m
Nemesis -55.9m
Loki -950.19m
Capsule -1.42m
Capsule -7.04m
Viator -254.25m
Nemesis -77.17m
Capsule -0.01m
Capsule - Genolution 'Auroral' 197-variant -0.01m
Capsule -0.01m
Heretic -218.94m
Capsule -19.63m
Capsule -0.01m
Capsule -0.01m

(18:50:34) Rancer
Nemesis -47.93m
Capsule -0.01m

(19:16:15) H9-J8N, C1-HAB, 1IX-C0
Vexor Navy Issue +166.42m
Capsule +0.01m
Stratios +232.61m
Capsule +0.01m
Thanatos +2669.19m
Nemesis -163.34m
Capsule +0.01m
Moros +2770.53m
Siren I +6.51m
Dragonfly I +2.78m
Dragonfly I +2.78m

(19:46:21) G-AOTH
Mobile Tractor Unit +6.95m
Retriever +39.6m
Capsule +108.33m

(19:53:33) G-AOTH
Capsule +0.01m

(20:21:09) F-TE1T, GM-0K7
Templar II +10.54m
Templar II +10.54m
Nidhoggur +1998.07m
Capsule +0.01m

(20:30:33) E1F-LK
Stratios +205.84m
Capsule +0.01m

(20:47:14) H74-B0
Hound -74.13m
'Wetu' Mobile Depot +50.61m
Purifier -55.81m

(20:53:54) EA-HSA
Vexor +12.82m
Capsule +4.65m

Stats
ISK Destroyed: 18,437,333,013.8
ISK Lost: 2,616,332,455
ISK Delta: 15,821,000,558.8
Efficiency: 87.573%

Overall evaluation
  • (Positive stuff)
    (Negative stuff)
    LESSONS LEARNED:
    -Cyno hunters light cynos at 30km. do not light cynos inside a bubble. that will cause the fleet to align slowly and escape slowly, making easy targets for the enemy.
    -Rollers must actively communicate. one roller left the fleet without checking out with the fc. this caused irritation and confusion and a scramble for a new roller.
    -Do not lie to Templeman. If discovered lying, your character and all characters associated with your human body will be banned from Bombers Bar.
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Out of curiosiry, what's the deal with your ALLCAPS thing ?
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I used all caps to make the report look and feel like a military report. I can change it to E-Uni's preferred format, I'm not sure what it is, but let me know, and I can change it.
AAR updated in lowercase format.
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I you want to make it even less readable you could just lose the punctuation and/or the line breaks.
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I'd suggest more focus on the action rather than things like the drama, despite Tempelman's undue focus on the loot theft.


The fleet lost about 18 bombers, several recons, a loki hunter and the loot truck to the doomsday, about 5b total. That was really due to the indecision by the FC, being a weaker target than the one we'd currently engaged, the multiple gate jumps it managed enabled Goons to mobilise a response fleet so we didn't kill any of them, with hindsight of course, the travel fit carrier on the gate should have been killed first. Individually, the fleet should have spread out more to avoid that many losses to one doomsday, especially a loot truck.
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Thank you for your feedback. I will make adjustments on the next report.
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First of all: good of you to write up an AAR for a BB fleet!


I do have some remarks though for the next one:
- Not sure why you didn't sum up the losses that you mention casually in the middle of some content description, especially since they seem to have been substantial (and you already used the formatting for it, but only summed up the kills). This is kinda important, ppl like me who skip to the end first to take a loot at the TL;DR summary get confused by this. I thought "great fleet, some cap kills and no losses"...

- Also, you mention at one point that you were waiting for the fleet to return? Did you die as well or was there another reason? Was that part of the doomsday or did you loose ships during other engagements too?

- What's up with the "CONTENT" that seems somewhat randomly to appear in the AAR?


In all, for a long fleet like this with a set format and long periods of waiting mixed with short periods of action I like the idea of a military-report-style AAR. You can work a bit on making it a bit easier to read / follow, if you plan to do more of these put some work/thought into a neat and consistent formatting. As for the content related issues that were brought up by me and others, maybe read a few other AARs by experienced FCs/pilots in this library and pay attention to what kind of content they cover in how much detail and any aspects they highlight. This is not so all AARs sound the same, but to help you present a clear picture of what was happening and help your readers learn from it.
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