[WHC] Quit Nagging Me

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[WHC] Quit Nagging Me

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Naglfar died.

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Top quality AAR, 10/10. Would read again. Very gripping.
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I enjoyed the part where you described in detail how you came to execute such a manoeuvre.
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The aar really helps me capture the emotions and personalities involved. 10/10, would read again.
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Post by Ersin Oghuz »

Truely inspiring AAR! I will compose similar AARs from now on. :)
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There's not an ounce of excitement. Not a whisper of a thrill. This relationship AAR has all the passion of a pair of titmice. 0/10, left me quite unsatisfied.
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Urban, after reading your finely detailed AAR I am not surprised to see you're still a sophomore. Get your shit together and get your graduate title already.

In the immortal words of Dean Wormer: "Fat, drunk and stupid is no way to go through life, son. Do you know what your grade point average is? Mr. Oxide, president of Wormhole House - 1.6. Four C's and an F. A fine example you set. White Orchid has no grade point average. All courses incomplete. Mr. Seraphim- [looks up to see that Cassim has stuck pencils up his nose] Mr. Seraphim. Zero POINT zero. Now I want you to tell Mr. Valar and Mr. Tallang exactly what I'm about to tell you right now."
Urban Oxide: "And what's that, sir?"
Dean Wormer: "You're out! Finished at the UNI! Expelled! I want you off this campus at 9:00 Monday morning! And I'm sure you'll be happy to know that I have notified your local draft boards and told them that you are now all, ALL eligible for military service in Null Sec."
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Post by Turlough Dominian »

I have taken great time and effort to write the following feedback so I shall place it in a spoiler box to not clutter up the place

Big feedback incoming :twisted:
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Post by Zeerse Solaris »

An excellent example of trying to avoid doing something again in the future :)
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